Blog Post #4: Plans For Revision

 My plans for revision are already underway, yet I still have more work ahead of me. First, I am grateful for the thoughtful critiques and responses from my peers and professors. I plan to address my literature review expounding on my summary and making some needed revision there. Next, I will analyze and revise my proposal I turned in last week. After a clarifying conference call with Dr. Bacabac, I will be adjusting to my "Research Method and Design" section. I will be scratching my formerly planned mixed methods design and narrowing my research to qualitative. I am grateful for this because historically it is what I have practiced. Additionally, I need to make some adjustments to my "Data Analysis" section. I have reached out to a few key individuals for their thoughts/expertise in this regard and will be applying a framework/critical rhetorical analysis to this section. Then I will put my revisions all together. I will write it out all in one writing session, messy as it may be, and then comb back through it and make my final revisions.  

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  1. BrettStanfieldENGL6401November 2, 2022 at 1:42 PM

    Hello Rachel,
    It sounds like you have a great plan for your revisions. I agree that getting the expertise of others is crucial in developing strong strategies for the research methods section, I too will be doing this for my proposal. I also think writing it all out in one writing session will be very beneficial. It is good to just get everything out your head and onto paper without judgement and then begin the process of combing through everything, editing as necessary. I think your plan will generate good results for your proposal!

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  2. Rachel K. BaldwinNovember 12, 2022 at 9:55 PM

    Thank you so much for your comments, Brett! I appreciate it them! It's been a great class!

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